Great concept and excellent use of color! The image is a little weak. Crop out what is not helping the image. You might want to play around with the arraignment of the letters. its hard to read with the dancers blocking out so much of the characters. As a general rule you want to leave the top 1/2 to 1/3 of your characters showing.
You should fix your background a bit with the radial effect. Make the radial a little more balanced with the white lines. There are too much at the top and it is too even on the bottom and bottom right. A little organization will go a long way.
As for the dancers, When i saw the radial and your "DANCE", I instantly thought of a dance floor in a rave or club. The traditional dancers really threw me off. I was expecting something more energetic like a break dancer or something on the same lines as that, but a traditional dancer? It could work but your dancer.... is not dancing. She's just standing there. Perhaps giving her arms or legs in a single pose could work when making multiples of the same person. I would have been awesome to see maybe two dancing poses and used in multiple copies and angles. Almost giving the impression of a dance floor for them.
Hmm? i think that the drawing is good but i think that the background is too "hip" or to modern to have something so traditional with it. maybe add More movement and more dancers that would work and maybe changing the color to warm colors.
Great concept and excellent use of color! The image is a little weak. Crop out what is not helping the image. You might want to play around with the arraignment of the letters. its hard to read with the dancers blocking out so much of the characters. As a general rule you want to leave the top 1/2 to 1/3 of your characters showing.
ReplyDeleteYou should fix your background a bit with the radial effect. Make the radial a little more balanced with the white lines. There are too much at the top and it is too even on the bottom and bottom right. A little organization will go a long way.
ReplyDeleteAs for the dancers, When i saw the radial and your "DANCE", I instantly thought of a dance floor in a rave or club. The traditional dancers really threw me off. I was expecting something more energetic like a break dancer or something on the same lines as that, but a traditional dancer? It could work but your dancer.... is not dancing. She's just standing there. Perhaps giving her arms or legs in a single pose could work when making multiples of the same person. I would have been awesome to see maybe two dancing poses and used in multiple copies and angles. Almost giving the impression of a dance floor for them.
Hmm? i think that the drawing is good but i think that the background is too "hip" or to modern to have something so traditional with it. maybe add More movement and more dancers that would work and maybe changing the color to warm colors.
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